Today is Six Sentence Sunday, where both published and non-published writers share six sentences from their work. I've posted an excerpt from my novel LIFE ON THE EDGE. Emily are Sergei are sharing a moment after a successful competition.
“Bet you never thought you’d see this day when you first
started working with me,” I said. “I could hardly stay upright in the lifts.”
“I always knew you had it in you.”
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Great tension, Jennifer - and perfect timing with Dancing on Ice in full flow.
ReplyDeleteVery good six! Intrigued that gratitude is the only emotion she can show to him. Need more!!
ReplyDeleteEven though they 'broken' your link (7 sentences) I had to come looking. I love the way you build up the emotion here.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry! I don't understand the broken link. It's six sentences unless they're counting "I said" as a sentence? I thought since there was no period, it was counted as part of the first sentence.
DeleteNow we want to know why gratitude is the only emotion allowable. Great six.
ReplyDeleteThat last line was the perfect compliment to the rest of the six. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteLove this!
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