Today is Six Sentence Sunday, where both published and non-published writers share six sentences from their work. I've posted an excerpt from my novel LIFE ON THE EDGE. This is a bit further into the scene I featured last week. Emily and Sergei are with a group at a nightclub in Tokyo, trying to keep up appearances.
After a few minutes, I sensed someone behind me. My pulse
quickened as Sergei’s woody cologne floated under my nose. Sergei mimicked my
stance and stood close enough to me that his forearm touched mine on the
railing. The scene looked perfectly innocent, but no one could see the million sparks
of electricity generated through that slight physical contact.
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Oooh, boy, I can FEEL those sparks! I adore when the gaze wanders to the mouth. That's unbelievably sexy! (I still have serious cover love for your book, too. Every time I see it, I can't help but notice how gorgeous it is!)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sarah! Elaina rocks the covers, doesn't she? :)
DeleteVery badly, yes, please! Great six! Shows the tension :)
ReplyDeleteI think I just got all tingly! Great 6!
ReplyDeleteNice sexual tension, very subtle. Great six.
ReplyDeleteI like how you illustrate the chemistry between them.
ReplyDeleteGreat chemistry in this scene.
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