Today is Six Sentence Sunday, where both published and non-published writers share six sentences from their work. I've posted an excerpt from my novel LIFE ON THE EDGE. Emily and Sergei are with a group at a nightclub in Tokyo, trying to keep up appearances.
“Your face is red,” he said.
I touched the glass to my flushed cheek. It cooled my face but not the heat I felt from Sergei’s appreciative stare.
“I’m just really hot,” I stammered.
I touched the glass to my flushed cheek. It cooled my face but not the heat I felt from Sergei’s appreciative stare.
“I’m just really hot,” I stammered.
Sergei’s smile widened, and he took a sip of his drink. “No comment.”
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Terrific scene here! Short and to the point with a lot of heat. Well done Six!
ReplyDeleteCute, love their interaction!
ReplyDelete"No comment," indeed! LOL. You captured this moment well. Darn if having it pointed out doesn't make the blushing twice as bad! ;c)
ReplyDeleteHee, love that last line. Well done!
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